Welcome back! Thanks for continuing this! Can't wait to read Draco's diary!
Cheers!

Author's Response: Glad that you're enjoying the story so far!! Watch this space for more!

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great chapter plz do more

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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First off, you should fix your spacing on this chapter it’s doubled. Other than that, simply said well done. I don’t know what else to say. It was really quick. I liked the quick little kiss and clean getaway. Easily written. Thanks for requesting.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I have tried to fix the double spacing, but have failed multiple times. It just keeps telling me that I need the double spacing. If you know the fix, give me a heads up please.

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I think that this is an interesting one shot. Not many people write their Dramoines from this angle, which I think really makes the piece stand out.

There were a couple phrases that you used that didn't really make sense, where I thought you may have used the wrong word. I would definitely look through for that if I were you. Also I would go through and get rid of the large space between all your paragraphs it's quite bothersome as a reader. I had to scroll every two seconds.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. although I've also found the gaps bothersome, I'll try to eradicate them :P

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very lovely.

i thought that this was a cute, mainly realistic one-shot that you mixed up. you did a nice job of developing Draco with a lot of background information and i believe that that is the real thing that makes this so believable right now. i liked how you wrote Draco's POV and have no CC at all in that area of this one-shot.

you, however, were worried more about the ending and i think that you have nothing to worry about with that either. i liked how you ended the dialogue there and then added a final paragraph of his wishes and desires. it was a nice touch that i think added a lot to the air of the story so congratulations there.

Soppy? i don't think that this was too soppy or not enough but seeing as it is a shorter story it is sort of difficult to decipher at this moment. sorry, but i am not the best at telling if a story is too one way or too the other because having a review thread, everything mixes together and one thing becomes the other.

overall, i thought that this was a nice story, especially for being your very first attempt at a romance. you should definitely continue with this genre in the future. wonderful job, dear. feel free to come back with more requests anytime you wish.

Author's Response: There is a reason I love your reviews! Thank you very much, you have settled my fears and influensed me to further the story. May have to tell you when it comes out ;)

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i love your story it is inventive and very realistic...i mean what guy hasn't been mean to a girl or started fights with them to hide how they really feel?? lol it happens all the time.

i love it. alos it's in draco's p.o.v. and that is rare in Dramione stories. please keep writting.

thank you.

Author's Response: I always hope that I have some originality in my stories, so thank you very much for this review. Hope you like the rest of the story too.

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WOW that was realy good...i realy wasnt expecting that, but im realy realy glad i read it now! great job! i'll be waiting for an update pls pls pls do it soon. oh and if your looking for another story to write, a recomend a harry and hermione ship...i absolutely LOVE the pairing...i have some suggestions if your interested just look for my next review in the next chapie.

Author's Response: Hmmm, could be a good idea, thank you very much.

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WOW, what a great banner, I mean seriously, who made you that banner???

And as I read through the story for you already I knew it was great anyway. I hate Dramione though... It was well written however :D

LOVE YOU

Author's Response: The banner was written by some bimbo I paid in Dr Pepper and Vodka :P
Thanks for the review though MWAH

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OH MY FRIGGIN GOD! I LOVE THIS!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I absolutely love that you have enjoyed this story so very much! :)

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Hi!
I like the chapter. I like it that in your story Draco seems to be the one falling in love first. I do hope that you will upload the next chapter fast! Can't wait to read it. :)

Author's Response: Working on it as we speak! Hope you enjoy it.

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