Reading Reviews for Seamus Day Out
38 Reviews Found

Review #26, by Zacharias_Smith Neville: the Hero

12th July 2007:
I really loved this fic! It was funny but sweet and fluffy too. You captured the characters very well, though I wasn't completely convinced by Neville's dialogue but Seamus, Lavender, Draco, Hermione were all perfect! I especially loved Seamus and his feelings for Lavender.
Only other criticism is that I sometimes found it very difficult to read through the spelling errors/typos. Maybe a very thorough Beta reader would be a good idea? I know it doesn't seem like a big deal and it's boring to proof read loads, but I just found it hard to read the story without doubling back to try and work out the meaning through typos sometimes.
I will definitely be reading more of your fics though, cause I love your style.

Author's Response:
I am sorry my lack of beta distracted you... The beta thing doesn't surprise me and I know its a big deal.

I have one now so the corrections will be made...

Neville I thought because he's post OotP Nev and had been running around all day would be a bit more sure of himself...

Seamus and Lavender made a cute
couple. I'm writing the sequal at the mo and it's fun...

Thanks for the review

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Review #27, by singingsoul Neville: the Hero

27th June 2007:

It was a very interesting story to read and is a good way to explain what happened in the time she was gone. Also you caught the characters perfectly, especially in that arguement at the end.

It was a nice touch adding the memory to Hermione's character with the unresolved emotions for Fred thing.

All in all an excellent fic that I very much enjoyed reading and I can't wait to read more of your fics.

Author's Response:
Thanks sweetie... I'm so glad you liked it. And to read that you thought I got the characters down perfectly makes my day.

I love Fred and Hermione as a ship... Sorry you won't know the whole story until you read my second lit baby that's in the planning stage...

Glad you like it. I slip missing moments in all my stories...

Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #28, by Prince Of Darkness Neville: the Hero

26th June 2007:
Sounds like the sequel will be much fun. This was an incredibly written story and despite the slight chronological error which you mentioned it was all the more interesting for your version.

Author's Response:
Glad you like it. The sequal is proving to be fun to write - even if it's just floating around my head at the mo...

After reading HBP I had to figure out where Lavender was...

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Review #29, by SereneChaos Neville: the Hero

21st June 2007:
That was awesome! I loved how you had Lavender and Seamus...I love that pairing! and I liked that hermione was finally able to speak out about what she thought of Ron and Lavender...and what was that thing with Fred?! Do you have a one-shot abotu that too?

The trio and Luna were right...Neville is a hero!

Author's Response:
I love Lavender and Seamus as a pairing too and I'm just writing Seamus Night in at the Mo...

You know how Hermione spoke out about Lav and Wons relationship next one Seamus has his turn... Him and his Irish honesty rock!!!

I loVe Neville too and think he is always the hero in an understated way... Check out my main one of more about Neville!!!

Oh I have a story about the Fred thing and it is so funny and bittersweet... Because I love Fred...

Unfort for it to work I need to Finish From Summer to Battle so it's on hold for a while...

Thanks for your support

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Review #30, by Might Have Ben Hur Neville: the Hero

18th June 2007:
That's pretty tight. As you know, I like "filling in the blanks," so this was right up my alley!

Author's Response:
I'm glad it's up your Ally...

From you that means a whole full Gringotts bank vault...

There aren't enough missing moment ficts...

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Review #31, by rosai_gryffindor Neville: the Hero

18th June 2007:
i really liked this missing moment! it fitted in very well. great job! :)

Author's Response:
Thanks, I like it very much as well... I tried very hard to make it fit even though I cheated at the end (a little)...

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Review #32, by Elle Winters Neville: the Hero

15th June 2007:

Lavender seems so desperate

Author's Response:
Well she is isn't she...

A cute guy who you've always noticed but knew was off bounds shows an interest... becomes your boyfriend but in actuality YOUR the other women...

to me that slaps of desperate...

However, where there is a sequal there is hope... Look out for Seamus Night In!

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Review #33, by Snitchsista Neville: the Hero

14th June 2007:
Woh!!! Am reading this tommorrow. I need loads of time. It looks fantastic!!

Author's Response:
As I found out last semster while reading MeUncles amazing fics - good fanfiction and Uni work don't mix...

Put it this way this missing moment is one I haven'y read before... so enjoy!

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Review #34, by NevillesSoulmate Neville: the Hero

9th June 2007:
I was interrupted about three times by my little cousin while reading this. I'm so glad he left me alone long enough to finally finish because this was very good!

I don't read a lot of missing moments, but I enjoyed this one. Seamus was in character and just great! I also liked how you portrayed Lavender, I'm in the middle of writing a one-shot about her, since it's fun to make her kind of b*tchy. ; ) And I just love Neville! You did a good job with him, and I love that he's the hero! Great job!

Author's Response:
After reading yours I was so sure I needed you to read this because you Neville chacterisation is really good... so you saying I got it right is a relief...

For more Neville read my main story because he and Trevor pops up at some point...

Thanks for your review... I like reviews...

Lavender and Seamus are really good to read and write... I'm working on the sequal now actually...

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Review #35, by ralj1640 Neville: the Hero

7th June 2007:
Goodness I am laughfing so hard great job and even though I usually don't like chacters beeing moved around (Hermione in this case) Thi swas worth it great job:)

Author's Response: I know what you mean about laughing hard at this one-shot...

when I got an idea for it I kept cracking up got some odd looks in Uni

I agree about not liking to move characters but in this case I had to... glad you like it...

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Review #36, by I_am_ever_so_Sirius Neville: the Hero

6th June 2007:
LOVED IT!!! Even though I - no offence - DESPISE AND COMPLETELY HATE the R/Hr ship, I still liked it a lot. :D 10/10

Author's Response: Well, it makes me happy to know that even though you hate the R/Hr ship you like the story... makes me think I'm doing something right... Yay!!!

Bt if you hate R/Hr stuff you should STAY away from my other stuff...

Thanks for the review...

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Review #37, by Sudha53 Neville: the Hero

1st June 2007:
I really liked it! I think i'm going to read Hermione: Tomboy before Ron's Eyes. sounds good!

Author's Response: I like it too she has all the makings of a Tomboy to me...

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Review #38, by searching17 Neville: the Hero

1st June 2007:
lol. very good! i loved it! great one shot! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks I love that you loved it, as one shot's go it was pretty fun to write and in my head for ages... thanks for your support!!!

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