Wow.. You are an amazing author but damn is that Chuck Davies an arse! I hope she gets rid of him, I can't stand self-obsessed blokes!

Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon! :)

Steph.xx

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Pleaaase keep going!!! I LOVE THESE!!!

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Come on! We need the rest of the story! I can't wait much longer.

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Update soon! Waiting on tenterhooks!

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Please update. You are leaving this story on a cliffhanger!

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UPDATE SOON! I am waiting! Loved it x

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NEXT CHAPTER PLEEEASSSEE!!! I'm currently rooting for James with Jessie, but I loved Albus way more before he went mental. It's REALLY similar to the Vampire Diaries in the brothers one's a party animal you don't like at first and one's a good guy then suddenly it's like the other way around. But I don't care, I like the VD. PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER SON! And I want to know if my suspicions are correct about Finch.

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Are you American, or am I missing a plot line? Sorry to ask but you said that Leanne had been away for 3 months. Summer in the UK is 2 months. I'm just not sure... other than that neato story! :D

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you are a good writer! keep up the good work :)

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Hey, I absolutely LOVE your story! It's hilarious and I can't stop reading it! You have all the right names and information about the next generation as well which is so good! (I hate it when people get things wrong and like add extra people in to the family and stuff haha) I'm loving the fight over Jessie between James and Al as well and can't wait to read what happens next! Please update soon! Xxxx

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I still love this story, but I honestly dont know WHO i want Jessie to be with now. I have no clue what so ever. Just as long as leannne is away I'm good. Keep writing and updating man!

10/10

Clea

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keep it going get al and jessie together. love the stories

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The phrase "Rolling on the floor laughing my butt off" comes to mind.

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Great chapter! Jessie went on a date with someone else: wow, can't see to what extent James will go.And Rose and Scorpius are liking each other a lot. This is by far one of my favorite stories on here! good job (:

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This is like a Harry Potter soap opera and I love it! I just read it all in the last couple of days. If you update soon it would make my day :)

Author's Response: Just waiting for validation :)

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This is super funny. I love how it is going. Plz update.

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Usually I dnt write reviews but jeez I had 2 now. This is crazy good! Al is a super jerk and bcuz of it Jessie shud b with James and Lily's bf.dodgy. I totally love James bcuz off all the drama I must say. Cnt wait 4 an update.

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This is the most exciting love triangel ever!!! can't wait for more!

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This makes me feel so sad for Albus. Losing the girl you've loved forever to your big brother must blow.

Can't wait to find out what happens next!

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I like it!
CAN u PLEASE update 'Bullet Proof'??

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great chapter! albus is a jerk! james and jessie should get together! and so should scorp and rose! cant wait for the next chapter!

PS: can the chapters be longer? i love reading long chapters :P if you cant its ok :)

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Thank u so much 4 upd8ing so fast it's great

I love it
However I don't love the fact Jessie and James arent talking and wot al said to James bout wot Jessie said. Hay ho I'm sure it will work out.Hopefully.

James and Jessie r so great together

Once again Thanx 4 updating so fast
Clangy x

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Oh! Great chapter! Can't wait for the new one!

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Wow, Rose needs to stop being so clueless.

Also, I have no idea how you juggle all of the characters at once and keep the story making sense. But you really, really do. It's massively impressive!

So excited for the next chapter!

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Ah keep going! I love this book so much!

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