Loved the story can't wait to find out what else happens
I'm glad you liked it. (: Report Review
Wow. The descriptions and the emotions were really vivid. I also like the personality you gave Katie, and the character you made in Becky. I have a question though. In the first paragraph, you mention a Bridget. Who's Bridget? I like the original plot and the way you developped her dreams/memories. Beautiful. 10/10 and I'm adding this story to my favourites!
That would be Becky's original name. :P I changed it while I was writing and forgot to change it in that paragraph. Thank you for pointing that out for me. (: I wouldn't have noticed it otherwise. I'm glad you liked it, though. (: That means a lot to me. Report Review
I really liked this first chapter! This is going to be more than one chapter, correct? I look forward to the update. I like how you were very descriptive about everything.
And you wrote about such a REAL topic. Things like this actually happens in real life, and I know readers will be able to connect with how Katie is feeling. I really like what you have going on here.
I really hope you update soon! This was a very nice start to what I suspect will be a great fanfic! Update soon!Author's Response:
There will be more chapters. (: I plan for this to be a novel. I'm so glad that you enjoyed! I prefer to write about things that people can relate to, rather than your typical Harry angst fic. Not everyone can relate to that. (: Again, I'm so glad that you reviewed and liked it! Report Review
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