Hm... It's just like most first chapters, an introduction. I'm going to have to continue to read to really get into it ^_-! But I like the idea of Sirius crushing on a girl instead of the other way around.

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Good chappie loved it.

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Wonderful chapter.

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Aw! Loved this chapter

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I'm glad you enjoyed. =)

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Good chapter

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good chap

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good chappie

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Alani came back

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*nods*

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good chappie

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So now we're over one depressing aspect...with more to come. I absoulutely love this fic...yet...I dont know..its just so sad..because after all that Alina is STILL going to be left alone in the end. And she loves him so so much.
I loved this line:
( Maybe she’ll recognize me and still believe me. She always believed me. )
-quidditch77

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Wow...I am seriously bawling..that was incredibly sad...
and very well written.
-quidditch77

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*hands big box of tissues* Thank you. =)

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Thee most depressing line: (“We’re young; we have plenty of time to think about that,” Sirius said, kissing the top of her head.)..
Wow..I started crying when I read that line...because they barely have any youth left in reality.soon enough Sirius will be put into Azkaban after losing his best friends..and Alina will be left to fend for herself without her fiance...and just..wow..that is the most depressing thing.
:(
Cute proposal though.
-quidditch77

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This was one of the cutest chapters so far. Lily is pregnant! aw...so sad..yet so happy. And Sirius and Alina are such an amazing pair..I love it.
This line was really good:
(Relief always came to him at the end of the day, knowing that Alina was still there for him when he returned home. She always asked him how his day was, even if it was three in the morning when he returned home. She loved him no matter what happened.)
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They definitely fight a lot. hehe..but its kinda cute in a way. I'm not quite sure where this story is going though.but I hate that it has to end sadly...gah...
-quidditch77

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That's what couples do, right?

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haha! I loved the last sentence of this chapter..super cute.
-quidditch77

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Aw cute.I love it...but I'm sad because this story is going to end sadly :(
its inevitable.
Anyway...I loved this line: (“Don’t ever let me go,” she said as an order rather than a request.)
I'll read more of this story tomorrow.
-quidditch77

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Aww, I know. =( That's part of why I hate Sirius/OCs but I love 'em all at the same time. =)

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Short chapter...but I liked it..she's back!
-quidditch77

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Yep!

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Very good...
-quidditch77

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Aw cute..and I love Lily and James! hehe.
-quidditch77

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Lily and James are just a couple you have to love, or at least that's what I think. =)

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Very cute. and well written.
-quidditch77

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Unexpected...but interesting all the same.
Good chapter
-quidditch77

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Thank you very much. =)

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cliff hanger haha.
I've gotta read on.great chapter though :)
-quidditch77

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I'm evil, eh?

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I love that they are so right for eachother that they got back together so quickly. Thats rare...I hope Sirius behaves himself..at least for a while haha.
-quidditch77

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Ha! It wouldn't be Sirius if he behaved himself, would it?

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It would've been more fun to see Sirius come up with a funny lie for McGonagall..haha..but I still liked it.
Ah..Sirius and his hormones haha..poor Alina. Great chapter..good to see Sirius being a bit more like himself.
-quidditch77

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I suppose it would have. =)

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Aw...I like that Sirius is still kinda trying to deny that he has feelings for Alina...its a bit in character..thought I guess he resolved that at the end of the chapter haha. But anyway, he and Alina are very cute together.
-quidditch77

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Haha! Thanks. =)

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