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Review:lairyfights123 says:
Hmmmm. . . this is such a good theme, that it seems a waste to not have it chaptered. Whole novels have been made with this theme--This simply went by too fast, and I would have liked to read more. The Happly Ever After thing at the end was a bit cheesy, but that just kind of sums it up. . . have you read "Twilight'? It's by Stephenie Meyers and it's an INCREDIBLE account of a girl falling in love with a vampire--that's what you could've done here--but it was good none the less and I understand that this was your first in a girl's persepective--THAT much wasn't that bad-- but don't beat yourself up too much--you should be happier with it than you are--don't worry about it too much-- :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the CC! As it was more like an experiment on a first PoV fic I didn't think of ever making this chaptered plus it is not what I would usually make long. If I ever tried something like this novel length I would go mad, but that's just me. Never read 'Twilight', but sounds interesting. I might give it a shot after I've moved countries. Thanks for considering it a good try as I know it's not one of my best. I'll try to be happier about it. lol And thanks for reviewing! :)

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