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Review:Sandra says:
'Neville seemed on the verge of a nervous breakdown' Porr Neville, that quote made me laugh. I really liked this chapter where each of them had 2 touch a relic, and c if all of them was good at heart, very enjoyable. Now Neville's going to mutate like Harry, and he'll have 2 go back 2 Hogwarts looking like something like Harry! Neville's Grandmother will no doubt have another stroke when she lays her eyes on Neviile lol Has Neville mutated like Harry has yet, or is he not complte yet? I definetly know that Luna is next. Basically they're all going 2 return 2 Hogwarts looking very different. I'm really fasinated by the Dark Lord of the story, and would really love 2 see him have an encounter with Voldmort, I think that would be comical. I can just imagine them together throwing insults at each other while the Death eaters huddle around and watch. Harry wouldn't need to kill Voldmort, the 2 dark lords would pratically do it themselves, trying to kill each other lol I remember when I asked u in my reviews which of the villans did u consider most evil, well now I think my villan is much more evil than yours. While yours might be greedy, and taking children, mine is much more different in a way. I'm not going 2 say because it's the big plan of my sequel ;) I'll be checking the update, i'm enjoying this story!

Author's Response: LOL Bad guys are sometimes difficult to handle and may come out too funny rather than too evil. I'll see how I go around that. Harry's case was different so Neville won't change as much. You won't see his mutation in action either until chapter 27! Eep! But by then Luna will have also get her own changes. Hmm... An encounter between Voldy and Neb might not happen, but who knows? And things will be a bit more dramatic than the two dark lords doing each other. Hehehe! You'll see. Thanks for reviewing!

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