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Review:loony86 says:
Your story is really beginning to have me hooked... and that's saying something for a marauder era romance fic! It's really good, so please don't kill me for mentioning a few small things I didn't like:

You advertise "little red riding hood" in the middle of your story; frankly, that annoyed me. I suppose it'll be a good story (and I'll probably read it), but you could add an A/N, or tell us about the story on your Author's Page, because putting it into the fic breaks the fluidity of the story.

The "flashback to scene" thing is also a little awkward; maybe you could just put a line of asterisks before and after that scene, because you mention that it is a flashback ("Lily recalled the scene of telling them"), so it's quite clear what you're doing there.

Oh, and if you need a banner: Have you tried The Dark Arts? There's a link off our forum.

I hope I didn't hurt you or anything, because you know that that is not my intention. It's really just minor stuff that I mentioned, and you should be able to fix it quite easily. (If you like, that is, my suggestions are just... well, suggestions.) I'm looking forward to the next chapters! =))

Author's Response: Sank you verry much for ze reviex (not to mension longue..) I ams very glad to hear zat I hav' got you 'ooked! :)
(Practicing Fleur-imitation)
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