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Review:hermione006 says:
I thought this story was great and you perfectly captured the moment. I loved the relationship that you built between Sirius and Remus. Their personalities were perfect and very amusing.

One of my favorite lines was. . ."He was doing an odd sort of dance, which was really more of an up-and-down shimmy, complete with a bloody ferret swinging lifelessly from each hand." I found this very amusing and it really fit Sirius' character.

Something I noticed was the transitions among the scenes were slightly confusing and didn't flow very well. Adding a few sentences that connected the scenes together would help this and make the story even better. I hope you write more 'missing moments'.-Hermione006



Author's Response: Hmm, I see what you mean about the transitions. I'll mull that one over for sure. I'm also happy you liked the dancing, as that was a fun scene to write. I kept picturing John Travolta and Uma Thurman's dance in Pulp Fiction, hehe. Thanks for the thoughtful review, I really appreciate it!

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