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Review:TheOne says:
One thing that you really should work on, Crabbe, is your description. It’s not enough to just use quotations and then the occasional blurb. I don’t mean that in a bad way. Every writer has his/her flaws. Mine happens to be spelling, grammar, and description also. I also must add that I like how when you’re not writing quotations you use yourself as the narrator. Eg. “I would have to go into details about Luna's parents if I were to explain it.” It isn’t a common thing to see in stories but I really like it when the author does that just for something different.

I think this is my favorite chapter since it made me laugh. “Isn’t there supposed to be money in here?” lol poor Harry. I love Potzer! You did an excellent job with his character- I can sooooo picture him being Luna’s brother. Good job Crab!

Author's Response: Crab? Is that an insult! I'll take you on! Just cuz a guy writes FF doesn't mean I CAN'T START SOME SHI-..... Oh that's my PenName. Sorry! Thanks for reviewing (like you said you would) and I'm glad I can count on you to write a good review.

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