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Review:PhoenixStorm says:
well I finally got over here to read this so now I can make up for nicking all the good questions in Missy's thread :p .

You had one mistake and a brit correction so almost perfect :D . But did he realize that what he had done to me could cause my own death? realise. But was sort of wish was that? what sort. There was also a bit somewhere in here when Ginny thinks Harry has just rejected her, but I've lost hwere it is. I wasn't too sure about that because right at hte beginning you talk about how it would have been better if Harry had told her they could never work that he didn't like her anymore or something, which is more rejection and what he did was worse than that. So not too sure baout that line, wherever it actually is.

I've only read one other fic about this, Noblevyne's I'll Follow The Sun, and you both wrote it great. I thought you really got into Ginny's emotions and characterised her well. I especially thought I am not a book to be put aside, a marker keeping the page where he had stopped was a very Ginny thing to think.

I really thought it was clever to note the similarities between Voldemort and Harry in Each had the will to prove himself and the ambition to finish what he started. Both are leaders and powerful wizards, I've never really thought about it before but it's very much there in the books and mentioned often. and then you had Ginny think And I am the girl who knows and has loved each of them which I htought was great and really well done.

I liked how you included the if only's If only that moment could have lasted forever and wondering about the might have been's, very real and I could easily picture Ginny thinking them. And for some reason I really liked The paths that Harry and I had to take from that moment were not the same, nor would they ever meet.

I htink my favourite line was An inexplicable silence that filled my heart with despair and hope, like being lost by one thing and found by another it was such a lovely paradoxical image. And then I loved the reflection on Dumbledore's words, they are at his funeral after all I believed him then, but now I understood what he had really meant it was good that she undertands now and i liked how you ended it. Lovely fic, really liked reading it :) .

Author's Response: Wow. This is quite a review. =D It's wonderful to hear that you liked the story (and that there was only one small mistake =P). Ginny's an interesting character to write - or maybe it's something I picked up from fanon (like Lauren's story). I enjoyed writing her thoughts, especially when she compares Harry to Tom - a comparison that I couldn't help noticing in the books. Thanks so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it. =)

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