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Review:Aisu Hoshino says:
As promised, I'm reviewing.


You have wonderful descriptions, as always, something I must compliment as I'm not very good in that area. It was difficult for me to picture Remus as you portrayed him, but still believable, if that makes any since whatsoever. I was particularly fascinated by your version of Narcissa - I've never seen her written like that, and yet it was perfect. I can picture her being like that, and the comparisons between her and Sirius were a nice touch.


The rel-well I guess relationship doesn't really work here. Encounter, maybe? -
between Remus and Narcissa was handled well, and the ending was great. Remus gets a thumbs up for backing out after going that far. Narcissa...any chance you'll write something involving her in the future? Sorry, but I really did love her in this.


I'm very much so looking forward to the future chapters of this, especially since your comments in the forums seemed to suggest you're going for lesser-thought-of pairings. I'll definitely be keeping up with thus.


In the forums, you mentioned that you were open to suggestion for pairings for this, and I want to make a suggestion. I've been fascinated with the idea for this pairing for probably over a year now, and I have yet to see it explored. I touch on it in a one-shot that I'm posting once I'm able to, but I don't go in-depth. The pairing is Bellatrix/Peter...odd, yes, but I've always found it plausible for quite a few reasons. I doubt my sanity, though.


Right now the only others I can think of are Pansy/Ron, McGonagall/Tom, and Cho/Draco, but I'm sure if I were given time I could come up with some what-are-you-on pairngs (hey, I'm writing Luna/Tom, aren't I?).


Good luck!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks for all the great ideas! I may try a Bella fic. Not sure if I can pull her off but I may give it a try anyway :P Thanks for the help and advice!

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