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Review:brunettesrule says:
Well, I didn’t plan to review any chapter individually from these ones… But I had to for this one. First of all, I think you have portrayed Jay’s jealously absolutely fantastically – and yes it is fairly obvious it’s from experience lol – and the way that Tonks got annoyed with him first, especially because she’s so stubborn… The one thing I would suggest is that you could have hinted a little at Jay’s jealously a little in the earlier chapters – subtly so that Tonks doesn’t get it, but maybe readers could read between the lines… Maybe you have done that, and I just didn’t get that, because I was reading this late last night, so yeah… Just something to think about! Anyway, I’m off to read the next, what, 20 chapters!!!!

Author's Response: thank you... i did think about having his jealousy earlier on, and i might still change it, but as i was writing it i talked to someone who had an almost schizophrenic split personality, so one moment their practically his holiness the Dalai Lama and then they flip, and become jealous/violent/angry/ out of control, etc. this comes in later in the story... thank you very much, Bee

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