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Review:Irisheyes says:
I really like where you are heading with this story! The concept of Hermione kinda of losing it all in a sense and really reaching that I dont give a crap time in her life, I could see why and where you were going as to her stepping towards the dark side!! The paragraphs seemed slightly rushed but I think it was excited writing being the first fanfic, we all grow the more we write. You break it up well so its not really hard to follow. I would suggest if you already dont - write out your draft, save it walk away from it for a day or so (this is what I do so) then come back to it and read back over it. You will see areas that you rushed in, I catch myself doing it all the time. Then when you rewrite certian things - they come out less rushed and better then before. Not saying its not good now - that is just what I do. I really like it and I am looking forward to the next chapter. As for a banner. Check out The Dark Arts: http://the-dark-arts.net/forums/index.php?s=8bb8a29dcd337cb7260e5d9b8aa33454&act=idx You can check out graphic artists there and request a banner. Lots of talented graphic artists there for sure - its where I got my banner!

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much, i really appriciate your opinion!! Someone acually already gave me the link for there, but thanks all the same. I do write out drafts, but i can't say that I've walked away and came back. I'll definatly keep that in mind. Thanks again!

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