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Review:jenonymous says:
You think on such an enormous scale. I believe JKR should sell you the rights and step aside.She definitely does not write stuff as exciting (i.e. terrifying) as this. The Fachon is a brilliant villain. Is that what made Harry's scar itch, and there isn't actually a Horcrux here? Or is it guarding a Horcrux? Surely it could not have conjured the wall. If it could wield magic, it probably would just accio its prey and be done with it. Of course, if it is not satisfied with the violence of the kill, it wouldn't be satisfied by the magnetic approach, either. You have given me all kinds of things to think about today. I believe my son would enjoy this story immensely. Because you pulled Ron back from the brink (although you toyed with my emotions for, what, two whole weeks on that note? :P), I am trusting you to do the same for Hermione.

Author's Response: I was worried about this as it was taking me such a long time to structure it. I kept second-guessing myself, tearing it down and starting again. That makes your comments all the sweeter!

I wasn't sure how people would react to the Fachan as a villain as it's outside of canon. It is a mythical beast, of course, it's just that we haven't came across it previously in the Potterverse before. As far as I'm aware the 'original' Fachan is from Scottish mythology and is 4-5 feet tall as opposed to my souped up 4-5 meteres!

As for Harry's scar...

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