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Review:Ollie says:
was that da vinci bit necessary? i know it makes them sound smarter, but it sortof brought me back to our lowly muggle world for a moment, before it moved on to the rain cloud bit. and then the bringing marvin lovegood in, i liked that. except wasnt it the mum of luna's who experimented? oh well, maybe they both had a passion but when the wife died from it, marvin got turned off all the experimenting and decided to be an editor of the quibbler. also i dunno how long you've had these new chapters, but seriously, read my bio, it explains everything, plus ive got about a million assignments (lucky me) so yeah...remind me when you get new chapters, i never really look cause im out of it! (basically all the time) so sorry about the late reviewing!

Author's Response: Yeah I not quite sure... I got really lazy at the end, i was going to develope some of those ide and bring kloy into it and lily but then I was like, meh stuff it. I know that is a really bad thing to do. Damn maybe when I get over this lazy stage I might re-do the ending because I just re-read it and it is a kind of let down. Oh yeah it was her mum, geez I didnt even think of it like that, but it is a really good connection, thanks for that one Ollie, you have given some awesome suggestions. Thankyou I will certainly follow them up. I so sorry that I didnt tell you, I didnt want to be all like READ MY STORY NNNOIOOWWW! BUt definately will let you know in the future. Lol i know all about the 'out-of-it' factor. dont appolgise for late reviews that is fine, any reviews are good reviews! thankyou for supporting me!!

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