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Review:Bibbs says:
Wow! What a heart wrenching chapter that was! It seemed really short, but I'm not sure if it was a short chapter or if it was just so good that it flew by really fast. I loved the confusion that Andromeda felt throughout the entire thing. It was very fitting and realistic. I had to laugh at Bellatrix wanting to go outside during a time like this! I was surprised to see their father break down and cry, as well as surprised that he seemed so pleased about Narcissa. I thought that he wanted a boy? I might have to go back and reread the earlier chapters. I know you said you can't get a hold of your beta, but you might want to read it over yourself. I noticed a couple bigger mistakes, like words mixed up or left out. You could probably catch those on your own. I didnt notice any other problems though. Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next, since your AN says it was an important chapter. Something big must be coming! Please contact me again when the next one is up!

Author's Response: Well, he also wanted a boy with Bella, but he became close to her. Although he wanted a boy, that doesn't mean he would be displeased with Narcissa for too long. Before I was born, my grandpa said he'd have little to do with me but we ended up being really close. That's all I can say on that subject without ruining anything, though. Thanks for the great review; I'm glad you liked it!

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