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Review:beam says:
Comparing this story to " A Lightning Shaped Scar " / I like it very much / I must say this is little childish, but anyway enjoyable. The most important question : What about ethic? Are you sure the way Helen /and co./ acts is all right? And what about various side-effects , a great impact it might cause to Draco ? It would lead to a very very different result than anyone ever assumed. The trio, Mc Gonnagal and Helen look like an evil predator , on the other side Draco seems to be a poor innocent lovable(!) victim! I can very well imagine upset broken-hearted, knowing all Draco turning to something worse than a Death-Eater ...Simply: switched...

Author's Response: Thanks for your detailed review. I know what you mean by childish, but it's all part of the plan...:-) The beginning is very easygoing and funny but the story will change. Helena is now starting to realise that she doesn't understand what she got herself into and that she's not able to handle everything. The trio and McGonagall have their reason for behaving the way they do, which I will reveal in chapter ten or eleven, though maybeI made them a bit to unscrupulous. But Helena is getting more and more lost. Looking at her character and her history you can see she is actually not a very stable person, but very confused, looking for her place in life. And though she is meaning no harm to anyone she is going to do a few very stupid things, one starting in the next chapter and one starting in the eighth. Both my stories, Father And Son, as well as A Lightning Shaped Scar, are actually very dark stories, though there is light in them also. But what I want to show with Helena is, that she realises she's being unethical, but because she is caught in who she is, she cannot behave differently. She'll do some really horrible things, though I haven't plotted every detail of it yet. I will focus on Malfoy more in the course of the story and naturally what has already happened and what will happen will have a major impact on him. I'm glad you like my story so far, I hope you'll stick with me. Thanks for your review it's very much appreciated.

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