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Review:hp&gw says:
i love ur story it is wonderful, i think u did beautiful descriptions and explainations, and put emtion into it the only part i didnt like was when ginny cried out what she did it was a little awkward...heres how i would have put it.. "Ginny raced to the place where Harry had been and cried out in her head-or mind-- with all her heart, ' (in italics sonce its in her head...) why did you leave me harry? you know i love you with all my heart.' she cried to herself silently for a few moments and vowed to herself, 'ill do whatever it takes to find you'. ...with that it gives oyu foreshadowing and shows you more emotin and expresses ginnys determination

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