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Review:crystal allan says:
Wonderful chapter, dear :-) This piece tied up a few of the loose ends and answered some questions I’ve had (though obviously not even half of them ^_^) You did very well in creating an atmosphere of tension as Freya waited for her birthday to come, right down to the very hour. And again, the whole scene with the book and whatnot was very ethereal, or magical. I know that sounds very silly, but there are certain people that have a flair for really delving into the magical side of the fandom and you certainly are one of them. I love seeing things like that and it was really very interesting.

Now, I’m only going to tell you this because… well, it’s really late at night and I’m too tired to be embarrassed (though it might kick in come morning). I made some sort of awkward squeaking noise Eliot asked if he could kiss her. Really, it may have frightened those in the room with me. That was such a sweet and beautiful moment… on that I’ve been waiting for :-) The skeptic in me says that this is just the calm before the storm, but I’m going to ignore that for now and go to sleep with this wonderfully peaceful feeling still strong.

Author's Response: Aw... I am glad I brought that out in you... that was actually inspired from my first kiss... so sweet! Chapter 11 is still very much in the making and it will take a while before you'll see it... but I'll mail you or something :) Thank you for reviewing this... you are the greatest!

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