Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:crystal allan says:
The beginning here made me giddy. Yeah, it’s silly but it’s the truth. Eliot was so sweet and tender – the way he guided her with his hand on her back or shoulder was just adorable. You didn’t over emphasize those things, and wrote them in there very casually. That made all the difference. I really like how slowly you’re taking that relationship – God knows that if it were me they’d be snogging already ^_^ But seriously, it’s a good progression and makes me love both characters even more.

Now, on the other hand, the H.E. seem a bit creepy to me. There was something very strange about that scene and the way they all interacted, which you seemed to note a bit in the motioning of how strangely formal they were. I’m not exactly sure what to think of them, but at this point in time the impression is skeptical.

That bit at the ending about Harry was very intriguing, dear. I really like how you’ve been unfolding this story. Each chapter brings in a new aspect of the progression and we learn something either important to the plot or something in the characterization (which, of course, is equally important). I’ve never been imaginative with the spells and curses part of the HP fandom, and I’m really very envious of those of you that can come up with all those wonderfully creative things :-)

Author's Response: Thank you... I am very happy that you like this, so far... At the moment I am away and I am not writing much... but I will be back... The H.E. hmm evil, not evil... it is really very hard to say, I hope you'll find the solution to your liking when it comes...

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net