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Review:PhoenixStorm says:
sorry it took so long to get here, have been rather busy :). But anyway, wow this is a long chapter. In answer to your question about making them this long or shorter, I would personally go for the shorter one. It's not that I mind reading long chapters myself, but I find the general consensus is more for middle length (1500 to 3000/4000). :).

Now I do like the way you're developing this story. I think you have an interesting storyline and weave in a lot. Draco was a good touch at the beginning, and I enjoyed his interaction with the trio.

My favourite line had to be Harry attempted to raise an eyebrow, but found that it proved more difficult than it looked I'm not sure, it just made me laugh. Good end with Snape, am intrigued to see where you are taking this and any other surprises you have in store. Good job :).

Author's Response: Yes, I did sort of ramble, the next chapter will diffentatly be shorter. I like writing longer chapters, but reading them, eh... not so much.

I loved writing Draco. I had to make sure that I wrote his name as Malfoy though.

You like my story line! I didn't think anyone would, but that's just me.

I wrote that line because at lunch, my friend was trying to raise an eyebrow, but she couldn't. And anyway, all of my characters can, so I thought, how about for once, on of them can't.

Lots of surprises coming up, don't worry. Lots of them.

Love writing Snape as much as Draco, so they'll both stick around. Some more than others.

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