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Review:crystal allan says:
You must be terribly delighted that you actually have your own shippers! The interaction between Eliot and Freya in the beginning was just adorable, then it turned a bit harsh and intense but it was still good ^_^ You’ve been putting more and more stress on her during these last few chapters, and I think the way you handled Eliot’s questioning was good in a realistic sense. Does that make any sense at all? The scene afterward, when Freya catches him following her up to the hospital wing was cute – yes, cute. He seemed like a hurt little puppy, a bit jealous too. I love how you progressed their relationship here – there was a natural flow and progression. I like that you didn’t seem to be forcing it at all. Freya seems to really be leaning on him a bit more, trusting and confiding in him. That was really nice to see :-)

Honestly, my inner skeptic is a bit suspicious of our dear Eliot. He’s nice but somewhere in the back of my mind I can’t help but think that he’s too nice… *wanders off suspiciously*

For a while now I’ve been trying to figure out the purpose of that last scene, when we see Freya’s memory about her ‘friends’ blaming her for stealing their things. I came to the conclusion that it was there to serve the purpose of amplifying how alone Freya has been at her time in Hogwarts. There was something in that scene that I can’t quite describe. I’m not sure what it was but it seemed to be somewhere along the lines of character development.

Author's Response: About the last scene, you couldn't be more right... I think it would be very hard to be so isolated without having had some kind of backstory for it... For me it is very important that you get more and more information about a character, not just throw everything in there from the beginning! you are suspecious of Eliot eh? well I can tell you that he truly is fond of her... but I wont uin anything!.... ***jumps up and down in joy*** My own shippers! Hurray!

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