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Review:IchigoPan says:
Lucid was right when she said this chapter was going to be good. The fact Draco is just a pawn to Walpurgis' family and the real weakness and fear he showed to Harry was undeniably realistic. That was very Godfather-ish of you but greatly pulled off! Also, Hermione's presence to Harry seem to bring a sense of peace to him, even though he still feels guilt about Ron's death. How like Harry to blame himself for his best mates' death even though Hermione's living proof of forgiveness is right in front of him. Although you have small tense and spelling mistakes, this chapter was very enjoyable to read.

Author's Response: I’m really glad you liked Draco’s punishment, and thank you for your critic. I have been over the chapter and the Harry Vs. assassin was full of tense mistakes. I am trying to write in the style of Harry recollecting his tale to another and at some points he even relives it. This requires a balance of past and present tense, which makes it easy to over look discrepancies, when assembling the final draft. Thanks for pointing them out.

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