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Review:jenniiiiii says:
I did this challenge too, so I decided to see what everyone else came up with. I noticed (yes, I'm pathetic and counted) that very few of them were exactly 100 words, most were a couple of words under. Also, what happened with the Ginny Weasley one? I think you meant to put some brackets in there somewhere! I noticed a couple of mistakes, one being that you put 'teased' instead of 'tease' in this entecne; "Fred did teased him, but George would get payback for that, one way or another." Another was in Charlie's - "He was barely three feet off the ground and good barely open his eyes he was so scared." It should read 'could', not 'good'. Okay, apart from those things, I thought it was good. I really liked the ending to the Charlie one - I thought it was a really good capture of his personality. I also liked the way that Fred and George had to be split up for them to make new friends. Overall, well done, nice job.

Author's Response: I've fixed the tease and the other part (author's notes got misplaced). I went by my wordcount in MS word, but it could be off. I'll fix the Charlie one soon. I loved writing Charlie. I'm glad you liked it!

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