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Review:crystal allan says:
I can see how your abilities with description have grown since the first chapter, especially during that beginning scene in the Forbidden Forrest. You subtle descriptions there were beautiful and really brought the piece together, almost like a picture ^_^ This chapter was incredibly intriguing. There was such an ethereal tone around the cottage and it gave such a dream-like impression. There was something very reflective here that I can’t quite explain, but it was amazing, really. Not many people can write a story and incorporate life ‘truths’ into the piece, but I saw a lot of things in this chapter that were very insightful. Freya’s character seems to be growing with each chapter, and I felt like this chapter was a bit of a self-exploration for her. That was wonderful to see in an OC.

There’s nothing more I could say that would give this piece a bit of justice, and though I could keep going on forever about how much I loved this chapter, I’m going to stop so I don’t embarrass myself ^_^

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I really love this chapter myself and I am very pleased to see that you agree... I am not very good at "padding my own back" but sometimes it is ok, I would say. I'm glad you find this insightfull, I think I poured a lot of myself into it...

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