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Review:crystal allan says:
I know this isn’t a major part of the story but I just have to mention it. I don’t think Luna would expect or tell someone that they should apologize. I know this is probably such a miniscule thing but she’s one of my favorite characters. You captured her direct bluntness perfectly, but I don’t think she expects people to be nice to her or even show her kindness. Alright, I’m done now and I promise not to mention it again since it’s not even a focal point *blushes*

Now, I like that Freya is slowly becoming more and more frustrated with the secretiveness of her peers. It’s nice that you didn’t try to make her like Luna – someone that would have simply accepted it and gone on her way. You gave her a lot of strength there that isn’t common in OCs. This was a very intense chapter and even though it was just that one scene I thought it was very poignant – not only for the plot but for the characterization that occurred. Even though I’m still not sure about Eliot, for some inexplicable reason I want Freya to go to him after this argument. I can’t explain it but I do ^_^

Oh, yes, while I'm catching up with my reviews here over the next week I'm going to try to stop in and see that new one-shot of yours. I heard it was very good :-)

Author's Response: I kind of see your point about Luna, I never thought of it that way... maybe I'll refraise that when I do a rewrite at some point... Eliot, hm... ! You heard it was good eh? I'm glad... I hope you'll like it!

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