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Review:crystal allan says:
Reviewing for this story will never be a burden, dear ^_^

I liked the piece between Ginny and Freya. You portrayed Ginny very well there – honestly, I don’t like her character very much, especially in fanfiction, but you captured what I think JKR has intended to portray with her. I like that Freya doesn’t follow with the crowd, or popular believe even if it’s just about a school professor. That shows that she has strength of character and I think it adds a bit more to her personality. Again, Professor Jordan is intriguing, though I was hoping to see a bit more of him in this chapter but the small glimpse here was good.

I really enjoy the way you depict the passing of time. That’s something I’m terrible at and I was watching closely here especially since it’s a Hogwarts story. You’ve done very well showing a progression from the train all the way into Halloween.

The way Freya reacted to Luna’s sudden departure was fitting. That could have been seen as melodramatic but since you’ve already built up a view of this girl as being secluded from her classmates I think that worked quite well. The scene afterward between she and Eliot was wonderful. There was a sense of closeness there that is often hard to attain. There was something wistful in that piece and it was really quite charming. Lovely, dear ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you... I always get a big smile on my face when I see a review from you!
This was actually one of the chapters that just "came" to me... you know, I had no problem writing it it just wrote itself...
I am really glad you like Ginny, I wanted to show how an outsider would feel in the company of such an established group, it is not easy to be new... I hope that came across :)
as always, thank you for the review!


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