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Review:xobebeox says:
I liked this story a lot. I thought it was a little bit confusing about the way he died and about her feelings before he died because she didn't seem affected enough by the outside events which undoubtably would have been going on. For example, you say she's like every other girl her age but she's fought Voldemort and he probably died in some Death Eater-related incident: shouldn't you show something about that? Just an idea. I did like these lines: He had never failed Hermione before, but he would never know that, he’d never know the way that she still missed his touch, or the way she wept for him when there was thunder. Harry would never know. However, the whole failure thing really confused me. Why would he have thought that? I really liked the emotions put into this, though. You have a good, solid fic here. Good job, Megs and Cheeseopotter!

Author's Response: I'm sorry this was confusing, in the later chapters we are going to relate to what has happened outside of Hermione's world. I'm glad you liked that line, we enjoyed writing it. You will see, later on why she thinks she has failed him. Thank you very much for reading!

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