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Review:Bibbs says:
PERFECT! This was one VERY accurate portrayal of Lupin, reflecting on his friends and afraid of being alone. Your writing was so good in this, you can actually feel his despair at what he is doomed for, and his fear of the future and what he could possibly do with his life. I love how you had him reflecting on his friends, because they are all very important to him. It seemed like we got to know a little more about them, and somehow, you managed to show us his personality through his memories. I really enjoyed the memory about Sirius, because he usually doesn’t open up like that. I also thought it was good how you had him thinking AS he was journeying to the shrieking shack. A lot of people would just go off on his thoughts and not describe anything else that was happening. It was a good effect at the end, how his thoughts faded into the thoughts of an actual werewolf’s. I really liked reading this, it was a lot different from reading Sirius’ and James’. It’s a really good effect, the tone of your writing is changing to reflect the characters’ personalities! Very well written :)

Author's Response: Moony is such a strange character to write. He's angsty, but not too much. He's also very kind, but he has that "furry little problem" that always seems to get in the way. With this, I really tried to show all sides of him - the good and the bad. It's so great to hear that you think it's accurate - this story is based off of canon, so that's really important that you think that. Thanks so much for your review! =)

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