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Review:Bibbs says:
Wonderful! I really loved reading this (I am a big Sirius fan). It is very well written! Everything flows together smoothly and it kept my interest the entire time. You did a great job of including Peter (always hard to do) and even gave a logical explanation as to why James and Sirius befriended him in the first place (I’ve always wondered.) I had to laugh at this: "There was a empty feeling in the pit of my stomach. No, it wasn’t that I was hungry…" I don’t know why I found it so funny! I loved Remus’ (so innocent) reaction to Sirius running away. You did a great job portraying everyone’s character, even those with smaller parts such as Bellatrix and Snape. Great job writing in first person, its not an easy thing to do and still manage to get everything to flow smoothly and sound natural. I guess I had better shut up now and save some comments for the others :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the great review, Bibbs. I really love writing the Marauders - they have such interesting personalities. For some strange reason, first person comes really easy to me while I'm writing, though it does first require some sort of connection with the main character (which explains why updates for this story are terribly slow). Well, since this version of the story was edited a few months ago, it includes a lot more sidelong humour and gives the characters a lot more substance.

I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed reading it. Thanks so much for the review! =)


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