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Review:crystal allan says:
First, I want to apologize for the delay in reviewing. I haven’t been feeling well lately and I’m finally getting back into the swing of things. Hopefully, these reviews will come more often now :-)

I really enjoyed the interaction here between Freya and Dumbledore. After the last chapter I was excited about seeing how you would write the him, because most people just can’t grasp his character to the fullest extent. They’ll either make him to ‘casual’ or too ‘professional.’ You had a good mixture of that trademark ‘twinkle’ and that heir of reverence that comes from the man. Now, it was interesting to see how Freya reacted to Dumbledore in such a different setting. We’ve never seen how anyone other than interactions with them man on such a level and it was refreshing to see it in the light you portrayed. Some people tend to screw it up entirely but that was believable and certainly un-clichéd.

I like Professor Jordan very much. He had a lot of charm and charisma that was good to see in a ‘teacher’ role. He almost reminded me of Remus in some light. I imagine that he’ll come into the story further as time goes on, and I hope he does because I thoroughly enjoyed that short glimpse.

Author's Response: I have sid it before, just take your time, I enjoy your reviews a lot but it shouldn't be a burden, you'll get around to doing them when you can! I am really glad you liked Dumbledore, he is one of those characters that I have a certain image of in my head, and that is how i write him... I am glad you agree with my view of him! You will se more of professor Jordan... but that is all I am saying for now...

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