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Review:Scarlett_Heart says:
Once again I feel the Urge to kidnap James. This story as your other one was well written. "Well if you call running away from home and being disowned a good summer, then yes." Aw poor Sirius! I haven't really ever thought about it or read one where it actually shows emotion in such a short time. I loved that part to put it bluntly. "Or are you going Stag like the rest of us" That line made me laugh! Did you come up with it yourself? If so that is very original. I would also like to say I admired the way James asked Lily out. That is a very believable way that she could have realised he wasn't such a huge Prat after all. I liked the bag bit too; I like it when James gets the last comeback in. Although Remus liking Lily... It seems highly possible doesn't it but I am sure he would have pushed back his feelings for James's sake before they really started, Remus being the sweetie that he is. I actually felt sorry for Peter too. You put him across really good and believable. It must have being horrible being the follower that doesn't really fit in, to be picked on. And I kind of admired him because of it. But overall Peter isn't that strong and he couldn't stand up for himself and maybe he just doesn't have as much courage as his friends. I don't think he would betray James for Power in his younger days. Well I will let you get back to writing sorry if I have bored you! Katie xoox

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing this, Katie. It's great to hear that you enjoyed reading the whole collection of one-shots. They're my earliest works I have posted at HPFF, so they still keep a special place in my heart. ^_^

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