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Review:steve34 says:
I really like the idea here, and it's really well written. However, I'm not thrilled by the perspective. I would have preferred to go through this with Petunia, experiencing the angst first-hand with her rather than listen to her rant about it in the future. It would have made the angst stand out more, I think, to have the author experience the unfairness with Petunia because then it might have evoked more sympathy from the reader. In this format, you leave the reader the choice of thinking that Petunia is just whiny. Still, the story is well-thought out, you portray Petunia's feelings very accurately and give us a big insight as to why she's so hateful of her little sister. Very good work here!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, and now that you mention it, it may have been better to write it in third person. I never even considered it - this story came to me in first. I would consider doing it differently, or perhaps writing another Petunia fic, except I'd probably have to make it multi-chaptered and I don't have time for that right now. Thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad you liked the idea.

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