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Review:trixytonks says:
Wow. Bloody hell -- give me a few minutes to collect my thoughts.

First of all, let me make it clear that Remus and Sirius (along with Tonks, but thats irrelevant) are my favourite characters. I think the way you delved so deeply and accurately into their friendships and scrutinised their past choices is really quite clever. I love how one lie just snowballs and its like you said, they are bound by them. I think this story is as canon as can be for a MWPP story, with each character acting just as I'd expect them too. I particularly like how you portray Peter; a lot of people (myself included) make the mistake of making Peter entirely unlikeable. You have him as a good friend to the others, and while the traces of the future Peter is there, you can see why they wouldn't suspect him - not for his incompetences or his unfaithfulness, because there is little trace of it here.

I really could go on forever, but I'd just turn into a gushing fangirl, and you'd be hard pushed to decipher the review from in between 'squeezomg!!1!/!' suffice to say that this is one heck of a story, and it's going straight into my favourites.

Author's Response: *blushes furiously* Thank you so much for this wonderful review, I feel very flattered to hear you think so highly of my piece. This was my first attempt at writing the Marauders, as prior to this I hadn't been particularly fond of them. It did manage to spark an interest in them though, and since I have quite enjoyed their characters. Peter can be difficult to write sometimes, as I think he has quite a conflicting personality, and whjilst he was a good friend I think something always had to be there to spark his betrayal. I am so pleased you think I managed to pull him off though, it means alot to me since I adored your own Peter piece. Thank you again this for fabulous review...I am honoured.

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