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Review:Noblevyne says:
You give Mrs Black such a voice, it is exactly how I imagined her to be and exactly the words she would have said to impact on Regulus and Sirius in such different ways.

I love that little moment between Reg and Sirius before the train departs, it's so brotherly: warm jealous and complex. And you say it without any pomp or ceremony.

Loved every single about the Lily/James/Sirius interaction, it's the most fitting thing in the world that Sirius would say something like that, that James would instantly be prejudiced, that Sirius wouldn't like him. Young kids are impressionable and it'll take them both a while to overcome their parent's opinions. They both come off as little idiots, though. I love how Lily is basically the ringleader of their gang, fussing over them and showing some of that temper and impatience for them that we best know her for.

You've constructed an original, rich and very interesting take on the era of MWPP, you know I'll be coming be back for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Lauren. You didn't have to review, you know, since you told me you read it. But I appreciate the fact that you did. "Young kids are impressionable and it'll take them both a while to overcome their parent's opinions." I completely agree, which is why I've made Sirius the way he is instead of 'instant best buds' with James and already a rebel at the age of eleven. I have always loved Lily's character so to be able to show her this way at eleven is nice (because I have never written any of them as first years before). It'll be fun to write how her interactions with each of the boys changes throughout the story.

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