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Review:Lucid says:
The depth of the expectance that Sirius is feeling on his first day is quite awful really, I feel so sorry for him, trying so hard to be what is required of him, the cloud of expectance and the weight of disappointment on his shoulders’. I think it's his fear of that disappointment that is the most cloying though, tragic too. I am pleased to see that Sirius doesn’t immediately get on with James; it's a nice touch that most people don’t think of, why would they be ‘Bestest Buds’ straight away. The fight was fantastic to read, and so schoolboy like. I love Lily’s reaction too, because she’s right really isn't she. Sirius’ thoughts on Snape are interesting; I liked the description about the secrets he hides. The best bit, the part I enjoyed the most, was the sorting. I really felt Sirius’ fear then, it just dropped like a lead weight upon him. I really found this to be loaded with emotion, and the narrative voice you use is really wonderful. I’m looking forward to the next update :)

Author's Response: The sorting was my absolute favorite part to write. Just because I could write that disappointment and fear. While you are looking forward to the next update, I am looking forward to your next review. :P

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