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Review:Paloma Patil says:
This is just lovely. Loved this line: "She smiles deviously and presses an ice-cold hand to his face and trace amount of feeling he has left is not amused." That made me smile. I also think that the song is terribly appropriate for the scene. (One question - were the tense changes intentional? You use the present tense well in the beginning and at the end, but then there are several sentence written in the past tense in the middle..."He bent down, his body not quite as compliant as it used to be" for example. I understand if it was a stylistic choice, but it threw me off a little.) Otherwise, brillliant. Paloma

Author's Response: Er...I have no idea if that was intentional, I can't remember back to last Tuesday. I think if I wanted to make a good excuse I could just say that it was like Remus was being brought into the present...but that would be a complete lie as I have no idea. I'll read it over and fix it up, thanks for pointing it out, and thanks for your review!

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