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Review:xobebeox says:
The way you write slowly draws the reader in to the point where it is unrealistic to think about tearing your eyes off the page. From the very beginning, it's impossible not to want to continue reading. The scene with the piano was perfect because you portrayed it as if it were an art that a prince must learn for refinery. The coldness in the air was palpable; the way Mr. and Mrs. Black were strict with their son and his upbringing was visible. The strictness of his lifestyle and the expectations that he must live up to weigh heavily even upon the reader. The way you write draws the reader into Sirius. In this short prologue, you've developed so much character and set so much of a scene. The interaction between Sirius and Regulus was superb. From the point of Regulus sitting down next to Sirius and playing the piano, you've really shown their relationship. You've done a wonderful job of portraying Regulus as the one who wants the life he has; the one who works for it, since he obviously practices with his whole heart, and Sirius being the one who is reluctant to take what is handed to him, which is evident in the way that he plays the piano. The way that you showed Regulus as the son that would probably grow into his parents' dream, and Sirius as the one who would rebel was subtle, but the line "Sirius is hear to the throne and the crown but it is Regulus who wants it more" is especially poetic and telling. The paragraphy "It takes a few moments for everything to click..." is also very telling as it further develops their relationship and Regulus' character. Amazing job with this prologue and I cannot wait to read the next chapter!

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