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Review:Darkheart says:
I thought it was great, your description of both, Ginny and Malfoy’s emotion was well written, and even though I’ve never heard the song you used to go along with the one-shot, I liked it, and the flash backs were a good touch as well.

There are one or two things I found that confused me a bit, but it didn’t dampen the mood of the story. In the first paragraph there’s a sentence: Harry had gone to fight Voldemort, and not come back. I think it would sound better if you put: and did not come back unless it was suppose to be that way, then just ignore me lol.

In the same paragraph there’s another sentences that reads: Of course, she’d been with him to whole way… Is it suppose to be that way or is it suppose to say: Of course, she’d been with him the whole way…?

Either way, good job!

Author's Response: Okay, thank you very much for this review, I was almost afraid to post this fic as it's been rejected twice before. I'm glad the emotions were allright. And I'm glad you liked the song. I believe you are right, it should be did not come back, and it should also be 'him the whole way'... thank you for pointing out my mistakes! And again, thanks for the great review! Megs

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