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Review:xobebeox says:
Another amazing story by megs! You did such a good job here... especially the flashbacks. It was so chilling. Some of the descriptions I liked were her screaming into the "dead sky". That's such an eerie personification. It could take on more like that, though, just to show the anguish she was going through. The fact that she went to him in the end was slightly unrealistic, just because she was "writing an essay" and I'd gather she's still at Hogwarts, and therefore the deaths wouldn't have been that long ago. But the way you wrote it made that pretty insignificant. If you just tone it down and let him hold her, but not love him, it might be better. I liked that last line, though (haha). Maybe you were trying to say that she hated him so much, but it came at such a time when she just needed shelter. This was so tragic, with Molly and everything. Just... so tragic. It makes you wonder... how could someone lose everyone they loved and still... have any feelings left? Good job, and write more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I have a weak spot in flashbacks and am so happy you thought they were alright. I will go back and possibly reword this, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this, so very glad. I'm glad you liked the last job, and thank you. Again!

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