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Review:Nephele de Tourmalin says:
This is a really good start! I really like the part where she said Lily had "bewitched" everyone to like her. Seemed like the type of thing Petunia would assume. CC: I feel like Petunia might be more in denial about her jealousy, if that makes sense. Like she would word it any number of other ways but the reader would know her true meaning. Does that make sense? I'm sorry if it doesn't. This is a good one shot regardless. I can't wait to see it after a bit of fine-tuning!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. IThe "bewitching" part was my favorite part to write. I'll do some editing soon and may word things differently to make it more Petunia-ish (it's a tad hard to completely get into her character, though).

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