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Review:Hiduras says:
Ok... very different, I have never seen "Recident Evil" so I am a bit confused... You writing is good, but you have a long section were you have almost no descrtiption and that is too bad... One more thing; sometimes you repeat yourself a bit like: "The only other sounds that could also be heard" Do you see it? you don't have to use both "other" and "also" it provides the same thing. Here is another example (a bit different): "Not even the scurrying of a frightened rat or the moaning of the undead calling for them couldn’t bring their attention at hand." You souldn't have both "Not even" and "Couldn't" in there, they even eachother out! Other than those little things you are in great shape, the overall structure and gramma is very good!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks... you'd make a good candidate for a Beta reader. Would you mind? Anyway, thanks so much for your review. I've been meaning to go over the chapters with a fine comb and re-edit a few things but I tend to zone out, especially after I read the chapter like 8 or 9 times. Thanks again!

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