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Review:SummerFrost says:

Okay, time to give you what you asked for! I am going to be as honestly honest the most honest person could ever be!

First off, you have a lot of spelling and puncuation errors. They are every where as well as some words that are there that don't make any sense. Like you have 'wont' when there should be 'want' is what I mean. Proofread or do a spellcheck after you finish typing up chapters. That way you'll know where you went wrong and what needs to be put in. That was the biggest thing that you needed to fix.

As for the theme of the story, I didn't mind it, truly! I thought it wasn't half bad and I would really be happy to read anything else that you might put out on the site! :D

With some work and practise I really think you could be great! I'm being dead serious!!! You should keep posting on here if you like to write that is. I would be happy to read what you put out, give you tips, help you and anything you might need!!! Lol, you can already tell that I like to help people! You've got some talent, you just need to work at it!!!:) Your description was good! I think you could have added a little bit more but over all the description was well done! :)

Great job and keep me updated on your writing! I will definitely come back and read whatever you put out! :D


Author's Response: THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, i think thats all that really needs to be said, i DO have BAD spelling and i know i should have got someone else to check it out first but silly me jumped the gun, i should really re-do it *shakes head* thankyou sooooooo much that means alot to me that you are honest, i am sooo going to be fixing this one up before ANY more get done, but thankyou heep, your word have helped me really and it buts a smile on my face to know that you would love to read more THANKYOU again :D have a GREAT day/night

Author's Response: SEE I DID IT AGAIN.........PUTS..... not buts , LOL

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