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Review:Entropy says:
I think you got to the heart of the problem with Slytherin here, but the language sounds a little modern to be used by the Founders. And I doubt that Slytherin is the type to chose a bathroom at "random." There is an advantage with the bathroom, because that has easy and automatic access to pipes, which is the basiliks's main form of transportation. And also if you are searching for the entrance to a fabled hidden chamber, wouldn't you look for the more conventional and romantic spots to hide an entrance, such as behind a bookcase? I myself certainly wouldn't think to examine the bathroom sink one the fourth floor (or whatever floor it is) that has never worked. I think there was a bit more calculation to Slytherin's choice.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Glad you think I got to the heart of the problem with Slytherin. Totally agree with you about the language. It is quite difficult to maintain a balance, as I didn't think I could maintain a story in real medieval language-and I also think it would put people off reading it. But yeah, translating it makes it seem inautentic. I'll go through it again sometime and see if I can do anything about that. As regards the random bit, I meant he choose WHICH bathroom to use at random. I'll rewrite that part and make it a little clearer. Thanks for pointing it out.

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