Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:WickedWitch25 says:
It took me a really long time to realize who this was about. At first i thought it was Ginny becuase you said that Ron, Hermione and Harry were out of school. But once you started describing his dad it was obvious. Also, your years are a bit messed up. If he was back in 1976, fifteen years later would be 1991. In 1991 Neville is in his first year of school, if im not mistaken. (Hehe, the little things.) Actually, you said more then 15 but I think more then 20 is better.

Okay, now to the good stuff! This was a crazy twist and i love twists! My favorite types of stories are those that veer off in the opposite direction of what you expect. I think it was a little bit weird how you made him decide to pick Frank as his name, but that can slide. It is very true that it is terrifying to know what is going to come and know that you can't stop it. It must be horrible!

I really like your writing. It had just the right amount of description. The dialogue for Dumbledore was totally in character, I thought. Neville was tad off but not so much that it ruins everything. It worked fine. Throwing James in there was a nice touch too.

Overall, really great! :-)

Author's Response: A well thought out and honest review... Thank you! As for the years, I have always been aware of when it is, seeing as Neville is seventeen years old in this fic and he is not born yet... but I just didn't want him to be clearheaded enough to do the math precisely, if that makes any scense... I am glad you liked Dumbledore, he is one of my favorite characters to write! As for James... well that was kind of and experiment, I have never written him before, and I wanted to try... Out Of My Realm and everything...

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 229
Submit Report: