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Review:jynx67 says:
Yay! It's finally up! I love this story. The beginning and end were just so wonderful, it wrapped up the whole story. But the middle just blew me away. It took so long to realize it was Neville, though I suspected it. But you kept it so vague, perfect. I see what others may not, that this is an alternate past. Poor Neville, going back and seeing his mother well, but not his father. So sad. McGonagall was perfect. Very much like the head of Gryffindor. I love your Dumbledore. He is so perfect. And Neville's reaction when he sees him is so sad. At first I thought the boy in the hospital was Remus, but you surprised me with it being James! He was great! Again, the beginning and end just pull the whole thing together. I'm so glad you wrote this!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for all of your help!! I really mean it!

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