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Review:laughable_black_storm says:
Well done, though I agree with you that it was a filler chapter. However, everyone needs one of those once in a while to help with the story. In your first paragraph you have the sentence "... as though everything was normal, which further annoyed Sita." I think it would flow better if you put it as "... as though everything was normal, which annoyed Sita further." Also, I think it looks better if the spells are put in italics. I am starting to think, however, that Sita is a little bit Mary Sue, but that's just my opinion.

Author's Response: Thanks for the pointers =) Sadly I'm beginning to think that too <_< I'm hoping in the next chapter or two to get her away from being such. Thanks for leaving a review <3

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