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Review:toetallqt says:
i really like it. you should write more and make it good. However, i would like to suggest one thing. When hermione had to go back to get voldemort's wand you should have made it a little more exciting. I would suggest something like: Hermione's mind raced as she searched frantacly for Voldemorts wand. "looking for this?" came a voice. Hermione wheeled around to see Voldemort standing there, his wand in hand. " you didn't think it would be that easy, did you?" he said menacingly(sp) "stupid girl. Did you really think i would just leave my wand here for you to take and cure young Harry? i'm no fool i know that you love him and would do anything to save him from my evil spells. Yep, any moment now Harry will be dead and the prophecy will be complete." He said an evil grin speading across his face. "and what are you going to do with me?" Hermione asked bravely " oh don't worry your going to be with your little boyfriend after all. I'm going to kill you." Voldemort said grinning still more broadly. "not if i can help it." hermione muttered as voldemort raised his wand. she pulled out her wand with amazing speed and yelled the words she hoped would save her life and Harry's. "EXPELLIMAROUS"(SP) Voldemort's wand flew out of his hand and into hermione's. She smiled at him."i win." she said just before snapping it in half. well there you go . you can use it if you want or you can leave it as it is. thank for being paitente and reading my review. i really liked it.

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