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Review:Hiduras says:
It seems a little rough around the edges to be frank. It is a good idea for a one-shot but you badly need a beta to pick up on the small things (my work was saved the day I got a beta!) I have some comments to give you just now, there is a pasage where I would like to give you an impresion of what I mean: Lily lifted her son towards the light blue october sky and whirled him around her midst with a smile placed defiantly upon her face. The worries were hidden, for now. She placed her son gently in his crib and leaned over his tiny fragile body. Placing a soft kiss on his forehead she silently tucked a piece of his hair behind his ear. As she turned to leave her head whipped around facing the window. She could have sworn somebody was present, a mothers intuition. Realizing nobody was outside she figured that going into hiding was making her a bit jumpy. They were safe though…They had him as their secret keeper.-------------- Do you see what I mean? sometimes it helpes to have someone else look it over, just to catch thoose little things! But I will say one thing, it is a very goog idea and an interesting one... Peter often gets overlooked. One more thing... you write:“What have done?” Came the harsh and threatening..... It should be "What have you done?" --- right..!?

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